Talk:Onion (dog)

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Versions of this article were prepared on both the Wikipedia and Citizendium, in 2012. Leslie Morris Golden was the original author of both versions. It is unclear whether there are any passages in the version I am porting today that were written on the wikipedia, as the wikipedia version was deleted in 2016. The Citizendium version is currently under review, and it too may be deleted. Inclusion rules being looser, I am importing it now. Geo Swan (talk) 19:02, 3 December 2022 (UTC)

curprev 10:00, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 10,152 bytes −176‎ undo

curprev 09:58, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 10,328 bytes −5‎ undo

curprev 09:57, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ 10,333 bytes −10‎ reworking and simplifying opening sentence undo

curprev 09:55, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 10,343 bytes +63‎ undo

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curprev 09:50, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 10,163 bytes +1‎ undo

curprev 09:49, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 10,162 bytes +5‎ →‎Onion is cleared from doggie "death row" undo

curprev 09:49, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 10,157 bytes +193‎ undo

curprev 09:46, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 9,964 bytes +30‎ undo

curprev 09:45, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ 9,934 bytes +289‎ more clarity on what happened undo

curprev 09:40, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 9,645 bytes +230‎ undo

curprev 09:37, 3 December 2022‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ 9,415 bytes +358‎ 30 to 50 people die from dog attacks per year in the US - but, how many of the dogs are euthanized? undo

curprev 07:54, 23 December 2013‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 9,057 bytes +9,057‎ →‎Exercise Issue undo

curprev 17:28, 22 December 2013‎ imported>Leslie Morris Golden‎ 9,059 bytes +121‎ →‎Exercise Issue undo

curprev 17:26, 22 December 2013‎ imported>Leslie Morris Golden‎ 8,998 bytes +60‎ →‎Legal rulings undo

curprev 17:22, 22 December 2013‎ imported>Leslie Morris Golden‎ 8,938 bytes +889‎ undo

curprev 16:55, 19 October 2013‎ imported>Leslie Morris Golden‎ 8,049 bytes +681‎ →‎Legal rulings undo

curprev 20:09, 2 May 2013‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 7,368 bytes +7,368‎ Updated Onion's status. Still awaiting Nev Supreme Court decision undo

curprev 16:47, 10 September 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,882 bytes +195‎ →‎Legal rulings: added reference undo

curprev 16:45, 10 September 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,687 bytes +239‎ →‎Legal rulings: okay, i've added an update undo

curprev 16:41, 10 September 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,448 bytes −5‎ →‎Legal rulings: no settlement reached undo

curprev 11:51, 20 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 6,453 bytes +1‎ →‎Legal rulings undo

curprev 17:14, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,452 bytes −173‎ →‎The Lexus Project intervenes: removed more verbiage undo

curprev 17:10, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,625 bytes −13‎ moved the Lexus section up the page undo

curprev 17:09, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,638 bytes −19‎ →‎Legal rulings: chopped more words undo

curprev 17:08, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,657 bytes −4‎ →‎Legal rulings: editing undo

curprev 17:07, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,661 bytes −271‎ more rewriting and removal of redundant materials undo

curprev 16:50, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 6,932 bytes −291‎ →‎The Lexus Project and dog rescue response: removed the ref one last time undo

curprev 16:49, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,223 bytes −566‎ →‎Animal control impoundment: removed a ref. that is there for the third and fourth times undo

curprev 16:48, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,789 bytes −290‎ →‎Animal control impoundment: removed a ref. that is there for the second time undo

curprev 16:46, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,079 bytes −569‎ →‎Legal rulings: removed completely redundant info undo

curprev 16:44, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,648 bytes 0‎ merged two sections -- will do a rewrite eventually of this section undo

curprev 16:42, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,648 bytes 0‎ shifted a phrase undo

curprev 13:27, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,648 bytes +21‎ changed wording as per Sandy's suggestion undo

curprev 06:38, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 8,627 bytes −301‎ undo

curprev 06:37, 19 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 8,631 bytes −5‎ undo

curprev 22:04, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,636 bytes −8‎ →‎Legal rulings: moved a phrase -- I'll keep working on this morass unless someone else takes it over undo

curprev 20:39, 18 June 2012‎ imported>James Yolkowski‎ 8,644 bytes +25‎ →‎Fatal incident of April 27, 2012: the "however" didn't really fit as-is, adding a new clause undo

curprev 20:36, 18 June 2012‎ imported>James Yolkowski‎ m 8,619 bytes +6‎ →‎Legal rulings: +</ref> undo

curprev 17:20, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,613 bytes −245‎ →‎Legal rulings: more rewriting undo

curprev 17:17, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,862 bytes +4‎ →‎Animal control impoundment: added a word undo

curprev 17:16, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,858 bytes +13‎ →‎Fatal incident of April 27, 2012: for pete's sake, the lawyer who wrote this article didn't even put the full name of the kid into his initial lengthy article???!!!! undo

curprev 17:13, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,845 bytes −85‎ →‎Legal rulings: more rewriting undo

curprev 17:12, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,930 bytes +1‎ →‎Legal rulings: more rewriting undo

curprev 17:07, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,929 bytes −4‎ →‎Legal rulings: starting to rewrite this mess of a section undo

curprev 15:13, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,933 bytes +14‎ some rewriting of lede undo

curprev 15:10, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,919 bytes +458‎ →‎Animal control impoundment: added a phrase from a lower section that has now been removed undo

curprev 15:07, 18 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,461 bytes −448‎ →‎Family response: removed section, put remaining text somewhere else undo

curprev 12:38, 17 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,909 bytes +3‎ →‎Animal control response: changed section header undo

curprev 12:37, 17 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,906 bytes −5‎ →‎Animal control response: a little tightening undo

curprev 12:34, 17 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,911 bytes +36‎ more info on the impounding, removed text from below undo

curprev 12:32, 17 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,875 bytes +52‎ →‎Animal control response: expanded undo

curprev 12:29, 17 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,823 bytes 0‎ changed "innocent" to "harmless", as per Ro. I wonder if we would adding our own thoughts if we said "essentially harmless"? undo

curprev 21:25, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,823 bytes −1‎ tweaking undo

curprev 21:24, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,824 bytes −15‎ one word replaces five in the lede undo

curprev 21:22, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,839 bytes −94‎ →‎=Lexus Project: removed more bloviating undo

curprev 21:16, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,933 bytes +23‎ →‎Fatal incident of April 27, 2012: a little more writing undo

curprev 21:15, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,910 bytes −8‎ slightly rewrote image caption undo

curprev 20:23, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 8,918 bytes −5‎ undo

curprev 20:22, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 8,923 bytes −6‎ →‎Lexus Project undo

curprev 20:21, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 8,929 bytes +8‎ →‎Family response undo

curprev 20:13, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 8,921 bytes +1‎ →‎Fatal incident of April 27, 2012 undo

curprev 20:12, 15 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 8,920 bytes +1‎ undo

curprev 16:42, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,919 bytes −9‎ →‎Animal control response: moved the sentences around undo

curprev 16:39, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,928 bytes +151‎ moved another section up towards the top undo

curprev 16:37, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,928 bytes 0‎ changed the date -- he died on the 28th after being attacked on the 27th undo

curprev 16:35, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,928 bytes −44‎ →‎Fatal incident of April 27, 2012: rewrote this section, mostly trimming unnecessary verbiage undo

curprev 14:25, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,972 bytes −164‎ undo

curprev 14:06, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 9,136 bytes +165‎ Not sure of the format but I've added the HMC concerning viscous animals undo

curprev 12:17, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,971 bytes +19‎ →‎Fatal incident of April 27, 2012 undo

curprev 12:16, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,952 bytes −6‎ →‎Fatal incident of April 27, 2012: Added full name of Elizabeth Keller good catch undo

curprev 12:02, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,958 bytes +23‎ →‎The April 27 incident: renamed section -- put in some XXs and YYs to denote where the name of the flippin' family should be -- we have a million references to Onion, but not ONE to them?! undo

curprev 12:00, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,935 bytes −35‎ the Source Needed template exists, apparently, but it is very seldom used at CZ, particularly in articles in which there are numerous footnotes and references already in existence undo

curprev 11:58, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,970 bytes +187‎ rewrote the lede again undo

curprev 11:46, 14 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,783 bytes 0‎ well, we clearly have to have The Incident coming before the Legal baloney -- but this section needs to be rewritten undo

curprev 18:42, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Leslie Morris Golden‎ 8,783 bytes +7‎ Caption: Don't hex the cause by using past tense please. undo

curprev 18:23, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 8,776 bytes −1‎ unspace ref undo

curprev 17:22, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,777 bytes +1‎ undo

curprev 17:21, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,776 bytes −6‎ undo

curprev 17:21, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,782 bytes +5‎ undo

curprev 17:19, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,777 bytes +8,647‎ Added image of Rhodesian ridgeback undo

curprev 17:02, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,652 bytes +1‎ →‎Legal rulings undo

curprev 17:01, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,651 bytes +10‎ →‎Legal rulings undo

curprev 16:59, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,641 bytes +19‎ undo

curprev 16:58, 13 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 8,622 bytes +524‎ →‎Legal rulings: Added updated legal info and the assignment of a settlement judge undo

curprev 15:28, 13 June 2012‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 8,098 bytes +22‎ →‎Legal rulings: reporter undo

curprev 15:27, 13 June 2012‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 8,076 bytes +284‎ →‎Legal rulings: how Lexus got into it undo

curprev 15:11, 13 June 2012‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 7,792 bytes −1‎ fix date undo

curprev 15:09, 13 June 2012‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 7,793 bytes +359‎ provide source undo

curprev 15:03, 13 June 2012‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 7,434 bytes +96‎ →‎Legal rulings: minor rewording; sourcing undo

curprev 14:56, 13 June 2012‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 7,396 bytes +58‎ missing sources undo

curprev 14:50, 13 June 2012‎ imported>John R. Brews‎ 7,338 bytes +94‎ fill in template undo

curprev 18:03, 12 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,244 bytes −209‎ →‎Lexus Project: removed some info that looks like fundraising to me -- anyone interested, can find Lexus easily enough on their own undo

curprev 08:51, 12 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 7,453 bytes +32‎ Added breed type undo

curprev 21:54, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,421 bytes +237‎ added a sentence to the lede to give some perspective as to what is going on here undo

curprev 21:01, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 7,184 bytes +21‎ undo

curprev 20:55, 11 June 2012‎ imported>James Yolkowski‎ m 7,163 bytes +1‎ →‎The April 27 incident: . undo

curprev 20:55, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 7,162 bytes +414‎ →‎Family response undo

curprev 20:54, 11 June 2012‎ imported>James Yolkowski‎ m 6,748 bytes −8‎ less awkward still undo

curprev 20:45, 11 June 2012‎ imported>James Yolkowski‎ 6,756 bytes −56‎ fix awkward sentences undo

curprev 20:42, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 6,812 bytes +396‎ →‎Legal rulings undo

curprev 20:40, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 6,813 bytes +397‎ undo

curprev 20:40, 11 June 2012‎ imported>James Yolkowski‎ m 6,416 bytes +6,286‎ →‎Animal control response: I assume that the dog doesn't resist flow undo

curprev 20:32, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 6,416 bytes +6,286‎ undo

curprev 20:25, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 5,739 bytes +1,272‎ undo

curprev 19:09, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 4,467 bytes +807‎ undo

curprev 18:49, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 3,660 bytes +59‎ undo

curprev 18:47, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 3,601 bytes −143‎ undo

curprev 18:38, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 3,744 bytes +257‎ undo

curprev 18:26, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 3,487 bytes +3,357‎ undo

curprev 17:16, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 3,000 bytes +2,870‎ Will work on this later but I need to fix dinner undo

curprev 17:12, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,215 bytes +744‎ rewrote the entire lede. it has NOT started an international cause celebre undo

curprev 16:59, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 2,166 bytes +695‎ undo

curprev 16:48, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 1,471 bytes +1,341‎ undo

curprev 16:37, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 130 bytes +130‎ undo

curprev 16:37, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 77 bytes −1,008‎ Replaced content with "  Template:TOC Moved article to my personal sandbox for writing." undo

curprev 16:29, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ m 1,085 bytes +541‎ moved Onion the dog to Onion (dog): this is a stupid name, as if we are talking about Alexander the Great undo

curprev 16:29, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 1,085 bytes +541‎ undo

curprev 16:18, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Mary Ash‎ 544 bytes +544‎ undo

curprev 06:26, 11 June 2012‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 302 bytes +302‎ brief placeholder undo

curprev 21:32, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Leslie Morris Golden‎ empty −5,076‎ Blanked the page undo

curprev 20:43, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 5,090 bytes +14‎ add opposite point of view undo

curprev 20:37, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 5,076 bytes +364‎ add opposite point of view undo

curprev 20:24, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 4,712 bytes −457‎ →‎External links: delete section undo

curprev 20:18, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Sandy Harris‎ 5,169 bytes +28‎ subpages undo

curprev 14:23, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 5,141 bytes +1‎ →‎Focus for Animal Welfare Groups undo

curprev 14:21, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 5,140 bytes −1‎ →‎Background: 2 hyphens undo

curprev 12:04, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,141 bytes −13,773‎ →‎Focus for Animal Welfare Groups: removed another reference to donations undo

curprev 09:13, 10 June 2012‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,267 bytes −13,647‎ →‎DONATING to the Onion the Dog Initiative: removed the donation section -- this is clearly inappropriate material for an encyclopedia undo

curprev 10:00, 9 June 2012‎ imported>Leslie Morris Golden‎ 18,914 bytes +18,914‎ Created page with "Onion the dog of Henderson, Nevada, became an international focal point for animal welfare advocates in their struggle against municipalities and their animal control d..."